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Oct. 29th, 2007
Server 54, Where Are You?
Oct. 29th, 2007 03:06 amСмешная история мне ее рассказали, а потом я нашел ссылку.
Server 54, Where Are You?
The University of North Carolina has finally found a network server that, although missing for four years, hasn't missed a packet in all that time. Try as they might, university administrators couldn't find the server. Working with Novell Inc. (stock: NOVL), IT workers tracked it down by meticulously following cable until they literally ran into a wall. The server had been mistakenly sealed behind drywall by maintenance workers.
date 2001
For Review
Oct. 29th, 2007 07:14 amCriterias:
Does it have a lead? Does one paragraph flow into next?
Is the thesis statement clear? Did ypu essay stick to the thesis statement?
Are there any misconceptions?
Does the parer tell you anything new?
Is the topic narrowed enough? Is the subject adequately covered?
Did it tell story or three?
Did the essay keep the subsections clear and use parallel constructions?
Are the subtopics distinct enough?
Are all parallel constructions underlined?
Are there enough transactions to guide you though the logic, step by step?
does the essay feel carefully rewritten? Do any sentence wander?
Does the writer apper to know what he is taking about?
PS: Please, do not include anyone else. comment here or e-mail me.
Does it have a lead? Does one paragraph flow into next?
Is the thesis statement clear? Did ypu essay stick to the thesis statement?
Are there any misconceptions?
Does the parer tell you anything new?
Is the topic narrowed enough? Is the subject adequately covered?
Did it tell story or three?
Did the essay keep the subsections clear and use parallel constructions?
Are the subtopics distinct enough?
Are all parallel constructions underlined?
Are there enough transactions to guide you though the logic, step by step?
does the essay feel carefully rewritten? Do any sentence wander?
Does the writer apper to know what he is taking about?
PS: Please, do not include anyone else. comment here or e-mail me.